In order to gain an understanding of what the final printed product would be like to sample as a consumer, I decided to print a draft and to check over the design elements of each page to evaluate and react to any changes that need to happen before sending off the final file to the printers. This was printed on the same scale as the final piece will be to also allow me to evaluate any sizing issues that may occur.
- does the title of the seasons need changing for when it will be printed? or since it is being printed in the winter should it be looking towards the next coming season.
- All page numbers need checking against the final design in case any pages change order.
- Titles need to change to ensure they are the same as the ones at the top of the page.
- Page numbers need centring on all pages.
- Quote marks around the title as it is a section of the poem itself.
- Move this spread to the centre to create a divider between the information and how to combat it.
- Lower case on the large text as it is part of an ongoing sentence.
- Capital letters on the large text on the right-hand side as it is the beginning of the sentence, that relates to the other text on the other side of the spread.
- Even space between the page title and the artist name.
- Lowercase to 'r' on rolling in it, as it is part of an ongoing sentence.
- Caps are needed for each of the large text statements on the left-hand side as they're statements that don't relate to any of the other text on the page.
- The main body text must be moved down and aligned with the counterpart.
- 'L' on liked must be made lowercase as it is a continuation of a sentence.
- It's changed to it is, to make it clearer for the audience.
- The illustration should be changed to make it more appropriate to the body text.
- Space to be equalled between the page title and the artist's name.
- Is an illustration needed?
- Letters have been dropped to put the focus back on the person in the image rather than the clothing they are wearing, to visually represent the change in tone of voice.
- Is an illustration needed?
- Logo must be inserted above the image.
- Is an illustration needed?
- Add illustration.
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